Intro
- Start with flashback
-just finish training & was truding back home wearily & thinking about lunch.
Climax 1 (suspense)
- heard hammering at my neighbour's house and went to investigate.
- found nothing wrong and went back home.
- ear piercing scream shattered the tranquility of the scene at my neighbour's house and went to investigate
- found a hammer and a broken lock at the corner which escaped from my sight the first time i investigated.
Climax 2 (more suspense)
- felt something was amiss and went to take a peek through the window
- describe the mess
- chuckled evilly as he stashed the crisp notes into the bag he was carrying and he was limping.
Body 1 (action)
- describe the fear
- fished out my mobile phone & dialled for the police
-minutes ticked by slowly
- my heart beat increased with every passing minute
- i grew impatient and decided to overpower the robber but tripped on a broom.
Body 2 (action)
- approached me menacingly with a knife in his hand
- but the sound of sirens frightened him and he dropped the knife.
- in no time, he was caught.
Ending
- upon coming back to reality, I shouted at my father.
"Dad , can you stop the hammering! Not only it is preventing me from sleeping, it is also driving me nuts!"
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