Sean Pang's Blog: Fire Planning

Sean Pang's Blog: Fire Planning: "Characters -Tom & I Before the fire happens : feeling - excited -exuberant -could not wait for the results. How did it happen? - toppled t..."

Sean Pang's Blog: Robbery Planning

Sean Pang's Blog: Robbery Planning: "Intro - Start with flashback -just finish training & was truding back home wearily & thinking about lunch. Climax 1 (suspense) - heard hamm..."

Fire Planning

Characters
-Tom & I

Before the fire happens : feeling
- excited
-exuberant
-could not wait for the results.

How did it happen?
- toppled the bunsen burner
- it toppled onto a wooden chair and caught fire instantly.

What happened?
- the bunsen burner was topped and caused the miniature inferno
-poured alcohol
-hand caught fire
-plavced a wet towel over his hand
-grabbed a pail of water and dosed the flames
- stared speechlessly at the mess

When the fire happened? - feelings
- panic striken
-helpless
- utterly distraught
- stared speechlessly
-mouth agape with shock

What happened in the end?
- teacher administer first aid to Tom's hand
-rebuked by teacher
- supended for a week
- regret our actions
- had to pay for the damages

After the fire - feelings
- relief
-once bitten, twice shy

Robbery Planning

Intro
- Start with flashback
-just finish training & was truding back home wearily & thinking about lunch.

Climax 1 (suspense)
- heard hammering at my neighbour's house and went to investigate.
- found nothing wrong and went back home.
- ear piercing scream shattered the tranquility of the scene at my neighbour's house and went to investigate
- found a hammer and a broken lock at the corner which escaped from my sight the first time i investigated.

Climax 2 (more suspense)
- felt something was amiss and went to take a peek through the window
- describe the mess
- chuckled evilly as he stashed the crisp notes into the bag he was carrying and he was limping.

Body 1 (action)
- describe the fear
- fished out my mobile phone & dialled for the police
-minutes ticked by slowly
- my heart beat increased with every passing minute
- i grew impatient and decided to overpower the robber but tripped on a broom.

Body 2 (action)
- approached me menacingly with a knife in his hand
- but the sound of sirens frightened him and he dropped the knife.
- in no time, he was caught.

Ending
- upon coming back to reality, I shouted at my father.
"Dad , can you stop the hammering! Not only it is preventing me from sleeping, it is also driving me nuts!"

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